The annotated journal

How to align brand messaging with your audience

Demographics tell you who buys. Your customers' own words tell you what to say. Where to find that language in support tickets, sales calls and search, and a worksheet for turning verbatim quotes into messaging.

brand messaging and audience

Start from customer language

A persona that reads "marketing manager, 35 to 45, budget holder" tells you who buys. It gives you nothing to say to them. Alignment happens when your messaging uses the customer's own words for their problem, and those words are rarely the words your industry uses for its category.

Surveys, focus groups and social listening still matter. Use them to test the language you find here. Finding it comes first, because a survey can only ask questions you already know how to frame.

This article is about a different source: what your customers already say, unprompted, in the places where they talk about the problem. The needs side of that work, what to solve rather than how to say it, is covered in user needs versus what users ask for.

Where the language already is

Source What it gives you What to copy
Support tickets and live chat The problem described under pressure, in plain words The first sentence of each ticket
Sales and onboarding calls How people explain the problem to a stranger The moment before they mention your product
Site search and the queries that bring visitors The words people use when looking for a solution The query strings, verbatim
Reviews, yours and your competitors' What people praise and complain about when nobody asked The concrete phrases, not the star ratings
Cancellation and churn reasons The promise your messaging made and missed The gap they name

The extraction worksheet

3 columns. In the first, the customer's words, verbatim, no tidying. In the second, the problem underneath the words. In the third, the words worth reusing in your messaging.

2 rules keep it honest. Verbatim means verbatim: the moment you correct the grammar or swap in your category's term, the evidence is gone. And the best rows come from the moment before a customer knew you were selling something, which is why support tickets and pre-sale calls outperform any survey.

Collect 20 to 30 quotes before you draw conclusions. Group them, count which groups fill up first, and the ordering of those groups is your messaging priority, decided by evidence rather than by whoever argues hardest in the meeting.

From quotes to messages

The test for any claim: put your version of it beside the customer quote describing the same thing. If the quote is clearer, adopt the quote's structure and vocabulary, then tighten it.

3 substitutions do most of the work. Their word for the outcome replaces your word for the feature. Their description of the problem replaces your category name for it. Their urgency replaces your adjective.

What comes out belongs in the message architecture, where claims, proof and hierarchy live; the architecture is described in what brand messaging is and why it matters. For the deeper audience work behind this, see how to understand your audience and make sure your message resonates.

Checking alignment

Read your homepage aloud next to 5 quotes from the worksheet, chosen at random. Would the people who wrote those quotes recognise their problem in your first paragraph? Then run the same check page by page. Each page should answer at least one group of quotes from the worksheet, and any page answering none of them is either unnecessary or miswritten.

Read your last 20 support tickets

Open the last 20 support tickets, or the notes from your last 10 sales calls. Copy every sentence in which a customer describes the problem in their own words. Group the sentences, count the groups, and the biggest group is the subject of your next piece of messaging. The exercise takes an afternoon, and unlike a persona document, every line of it came from a customer.